My BFE (best friend/editor) Shawn MacKenzie has a fabulous guest on her blog today. Oh hey, look – it’s me!
On MacKenzie’s Dragonsnest, Shawn shares my Painful Process, Desert Canvas, and my favorite, Mom and Bocelli.
Click on over — Here’s the link.
Paying it forward – Shawn’s new book, Dragons for Beginners, launches today, but she chose to feature me on her blog.
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The Balance of Dragons, by Shawn MacKenzie
The wind rolled across the moor, heavy with autumn heather and the scent of paper leaves. A trace of bitter salt from the Suthan Burh cut the air with endings and loss and the promise of early snow.
It had been a hard year in the land between the rivers. Spring came late, summer was tinder-dry; ewes cast before their time and the salmon ran light and small. Now came the killing frost before the Blood Moon
King Sevuk blamed it on the dragons. He blamed everything on the dragons. From the moment he planted his standard on the hillside and unearthed the first fieldstones for his castle, the inhabitants of the local weyr were the bane of his existence. It did not matter that he was trespassing in their home, poaching their woods and waters. It never crossed his mind to ask permission before ordering the forests cleared for fields and the caves scoured for hidden riches. He was a royal, with rights ascendant. His will was law; man and beast would yield before him.
The dragons laughed at such arrogance, but were disinclined to engage in an all-out war over human stupidity. They’d been through dark times before and did not wish to revisit the experience. Besides, there was space enough for all. But every so often, just to keep their paw in and the humans in line, they staged skirmishes and raids, culling a few cows from the herds, torching, by night, the scaffolding climbing round keep and kirk.
Sevuk shivered his shield and talked a good game but, like many of his class, he lacked the stomach for facing wing and fire. He was the King; his contribution to the common weal was top-down, at best. He ruled the rules, planned the plans, and expected fealty in return; but foes were fought by hirelings and minions. That was their place in the grand scheme of things, for meal and mail to lay their flesh and heirs on the line against man or beast or dragon.
Mercenary slayers were his first choice for the dragon problem, but, when none could be found for land or title, he consulted the priests who shrugged, then extracted from the musty pages of forgotten tomes the traditional remedy of Gifting, the Church’s benign euphemism for maiden sacrifice. For what dragon doesn’t relish a tender, virgin morsel? All the best lore says it’s so.
“You can’t be expected to do everything,” the clerics brown-nosed. “Call it a tribute—a tax, if you will—in exchange for peace,” they insisted. “The odds are fair, the herds stay safe, and the people do their part for the greater good. You are the king. Who’s to say it isn’t just?”
The first was the Master Mason’s daughter, Eneh. She was bright and comely, and, as a child, had played underfoot in the nascent castle her father built. Sevuk watched her grow into a young woman. He knew her; he liked her. But dragons were dragons and he was the king. For his people, Sevuk hardened his heart and looked away. He locked her face and name in the recesses of his mind and forced himself to forget. As long as he didn’t know them, he told himself it would be all right; it would even get easier.
And it did.
Twice a year, beneath the full light of the Equinox moons, lots were cast and the chosen ones presented to the dragons. There was public pomp and honorific feasting followed by tears and private lamentation. Then priests who could not even put names with the faces of those lost, gushed pulpit platitudes about routing the devil and the greater the sacrifice, the greater the reward. As the years went by, the king, armoured by ignorance, lent his voice to the chorus of empty words.
How could they be otherwise?
In this dance with dragons, priests and king had no blood in the game. The clergy were celibate wallflowers and Sevuk, he was a bachelor. Whether out of the belief he’d live forever or deep-dark fears he dared not contemplate, he shunned expected needs for mate or child. Companionship was his to order, as, by liege right, was his subjects’ sacrifice.
So the rites of tribute continued. It did not matter that no one had seen more than a glimpse of a dragon in over a decade. The occasional scorch mark curling the hedgerow, an unusual claw print bleeding into the bog. No one even knew how many dragons were still at hand. That didn’t matter any more. Tradition was tradition. To keep the community safe, the fields and herds secure. To guarantee the greater prosperity.
Greenwood spit and crackle bounced round the hearth and echoed off the spare stone walls. Feet to the flames, shoulders hunched against the draughty expanse of the hall, Sevuk stared into the embers. His hair framed wary eyes, curling at nape and round ears in thick silver links weighing him down. There were times like this, tempest howling back into a past, when he allowed himself to wonder…. Had he a wife, a daughter of his own to share his days, his worried nights, might all of this be different? Might he have found the strength to face the dragons, to win the affection of his people not their fear? Might this hall be filled with music and laughter?
He downed his quaich of winter whisky, the peated stream burning his throat like dragonfire, then drained the bottle into his cup. Twenty-nine years, fifty-eight maidens. Had he a family, might he remember the faces of the women gifted?
With an anguished wail, the wind rattled the leaded panes, blowing them open, lashing the arras above the mantel. Sevuk turned his eyes to the weft-drawn knight standing triumphant over a bloody dragon: Draconis terminus.
Between gust and whisky and withering light, the dragon danced before the king, raising his battered head, mouth open in a merciless grin. The tapestry mocked him down to his bones. He closed his eyes, an impotent curse whistling through his teeth.
“Tomás – the window! And more wood; the fire’s almost ash.” The call to his chamberlain echoed without answer. “Tomás – Damn it!” Sevuk pulled his robe close and tried to will himself to stop shivering. He was still king. Let them find his body frozen stiff where he sat, he would not play servant to his own comfort.
At his back, the casement slammed shut, the latch falling true.
“Where have you been, old man?” Sevuk growled. “Build up the fire and fetch me more drink.”
Flames blasted past his ear, licking the embers to life. The king leapt to his feet, head clear, sword bare, and looked square into the face of a dragon.
Not a large dragon. Not a behemoth out of legend. But a solid, young lapis dragon, big as one of his wolfhounds, with a bewhiskered grin and pale smoke rising from his nostrils. But this dragon was not alone. With a delicacy that belied his size, he draped across the shoulders of his companion, a woman of indeterminate age, with oak-brown hair and a visage thin-lipped but bemused. The dragon’s tail vined round her moss-robed waist, an intimate band supporting them both.
“Steel serves no purpose here. King,” the woman said infusing Sevuk’s title with pitiful disdain. Not trusting the king to obey, the dragon disarmed him with a tail lash to the wrist, then blinked his amber eyes, laughing at the clatter of steel on stone.
“Guards! Guards!”
“Save your breath, Sevuk. They can not hear you.” The dragon slinked down her arm, onto the floor; he curled up, back to the hearth, eyes refusing to leave their host, as his person folded herself into the king’s chair.
“Oh, I’m sorry” she said. “Is this yours?”
“I’ll stand,” he replied, positioning himself so he kept both dragon and lady within his purview and waited.
Just as the moment was about to shatter into a million pieces, Sevuk broke: “How did you get past my guards?” he demanded. “What did you do to them, witch?”
“That’s what you want to know? And here I thought you’d grown into that crown of yours.” She causally sniffed the king’s quaich, then pushed it aside. “Sweetwater is better for you. You used to know that.”
“How do you…?” Sevuk inched closer, peering into the woman’s eyes. The dragon growled deep in his throat, but stayed where he was.
“Who are you?” Sevuk asked.
She sighed, the weight of years and sadness creasing her eyes. “And here I thought you might remember.”
The past squeezed the king’s heart until he gasped. “Eneh –? It’s not possible. The dragons – ” His hand reached out, seeking the feel of her skin, a confirmation of her reality.
Smoke in the wind, she evaded his touch. “Yes, well. Dragons.” She smiled from beside her companion, her fingers tracing ridges along his blaze. “There is a lot you don’t know about dragons.”
The king looked from chair to floor and back; then shook his head. How did she do that?
“The others, are they – ?”
“They are as I am, my liege. Does that please you?”
“How can you ask? Of course it does.” And it did, more than he’d thought possible.
A draconic snort of disbelief rocked him back into his chair. Not to feel any smaller than he already did, Sevuk cleared his throat and sat forward, eager as a royal schoolboy. “So. Tell me about your life, about the dragons.”
“Why tell when we can show, my liege.”
Before he could protest, the hearth-warmed blue twined his tail around the king’s ankle and spread his wings, soaring out through the window, over the battlements, and into the cold October night. Sevuk held his breath, then held his dinner – as long as he could. For a brief moment he thought he might actually have enjoyed himself had he been flying up-side up and not dodging treetops every few seconds. Where was Eneh? he wondered. Riding astride the dragon all safe and proper, or flying solo, perhaps. He’d seen no besom back at the hall, but there was no guessing what strange ways she’d learned over the years. Either way, the little dragon was right strong for his size.
Before he could sort out in his mind the wonders of weight versus heft, his shoulder met the ground with a resounding thump and, ankle free, he tumbled to a most undignified stop at the base of what could only be described as a dragon’s rubbish tip. He felt for broken bones, then, satisfied he would not fall apart like a stringless puppet, got slowly to his feet.
“This way,” Eneh said.
Without so much as a by-your-leave or inquiry as to his wellbeing, she drifted off through the citadel of granite basins and rough-hewn caves. In a great stone arena, she stopped and dropped Sevuk to the ground with a look. Perched on tiers round about were dragons of every size and hue. And by their sides sat fifty-eight women, aged fourteen to forty by the king’s reckoning. Sevuk reached for his sword, his hand coming up empty.
It’s all right, he told himself. Eneh wouldn’t harm me.
“I’m here to learn,” his words were thin even bouncing off the stone bowl.
“To make amends?” It was a woman’s voice, though, through the gloaming, he could not see whose; even if he could put face to words, he would not have known her name.
“If I can. If you let me.” A low rumble grew into a roar, half laugh, half scorn. This was not going to be easy.
“Please, Great Dragons, Fair Ladies. Instruct me, that I might not wander this world, a fool of a king. The priests swore by the Gifting – ”
“Priests are jesters in cowls. You should have known better.”
Sevuk ground his teeth: no one chides the king, but having dragons on every side gave him pause. “Yes, they are, surely. And I am not like them – I would not be like them.”
Rat-tat-tat-tat-tat. Tat-tat-tat. Dragon talons were nothing if not persistent.
“These are facts…” A mellifluent fugue rolled down the tiers of dragons, starting with tenor tones of a great bronze creature perched on high. The king did not speak Dragonish, so Eneh translated. “We allowed you the land between the rivers. We put up with your plunder and theft, the cost of living near humans. Still it was not enough.”
A slender green took up the tale: “We’ve known your kind before. Always the same. A little land turns into a lot. Sharing turns to owning. You refused the simple cost of living in dragon country and would have wiped us out, first dragon to last, all for our taking our due. After all you took from us, you begrudged us the occasional sheep and cow? The rare display of dragonfire?
“You dared not risk livestock or battle, but your daughters…. Were they worth so little to you?”
Before Sevuk could answer (for what answer could he give?), a muscular dragon the colour of beech trees in winter scraped a talon across the rock. “We do not eat people. It is a rule we have. Too much gristle, too little fat, at least on peasant bodies. Not that we didn’t treasure your gifts. We appreciated each and every one. We kept them and learned their names and faces and taught them our ways.”
“But we are not dragons, you see,” Eneh said, approaching the king. “For all their kindness, they could not sustain us. They proposed sending us back to our families but we refused. They had already grieved and our return would only bring worse to the dragons.”
Sevuk held his tongue, humbled by the logic of her thinking. She may have been peasant born, but Eneh had a mind worthy of a laird. Or a queen….
She sliced the thought from his mind with a glance and continued. “Then the elders called the faërie, and they offered to take us in, one by one, as many as you sent, across the veil. And twice a year, when the veil thins, we return to visit our friends.” She held out her hand and Sevuk took it – she let him, this time – and his fingers passed through her palm like a dirk through cheese. A resigned smile crossed her lips. “There was a cost. There is always a cost.”
Royal relief turned to sorrow, sorrow to anger, as he looked from dragon to maid, one after another, accusing him on all sides.
“You think I wanted this? The Gifting? Had there been another way – ”
The bronze roared. “That is what your species always says: There was no other way. Did you think to meet us face to face, to treat us with the respect that was our due? Of course not. We are just dumb animals to you. Pesky obstacles in your way to be fought or bought.”
“I know better now. I will put an end to the ritual; make amends to your families.”
“Coin for care? Be a better man? A better king?” Sarcasm never cut so deep as on the tongue of a dragon. “What happens now, it’s not up to us,” he growled, furling his wings round the women of the fey. “It is up to those you have wronged.”
Sevuk looked to Eneh, but she’d withdrawn with faërie stealth, and stood in the solemn glow of her companions. She spoke for them all.
“Actions are taken, choices made. They cannot be undone. We are blessed to know the wisdom of dragons, to share in the magic of the fey. We would not be thus honoured save for your rule, and so we have chosen to forgive you, Sevuk. Your royal weakness and greed, your world of black and white and narrow thinking. We forgive that. You are only human. But we do not choose to forget. We travel through the veil and hold to every face and name and moment. Each day our hearts tear with partings from families past and embrace with joy wonders present. They are memories that keep us alive. You were our king, Sevuk. That you believed you were doing what was right for your people, we understand. That you forgot us, our names and faces, we do not.
“You are the king. There is a price to pay.”
Even dragon rules can be broken.
In the morning, Tomás found Sevuk’s naked sword lying beside the cold hearth. No one had seen the king leave, nor complained much when he did not return. That night, across the frost rimmed moon, the play of dragonfire lit the sky in one last rite of Gifting.
From that day on, life was easier in the land between the rivers. The governing council liked to blame it on the dragons.
***
About the Author:
Shawn MacKenzie had her first Dragon encounter when she was four years old and happened upon a copy of The Dragon Green by J. Bissell-Thomas. That was the beginning of a lifelong friendship. Author of The Dragon Keeper’s Handbook (Llewellyn Worldwide, 2011), and Dragons for Beginners (Llewellyn, 2012), she is an editor and writer of sci-fi/fantasy. Her fiction has been published in Southshire Pepper-Pot, 2010 Skyline Review, and as a winner of the 2010 Shires Press Award for Short Stories. Shawn is an avid student of myth, religion, philosophy, and animals, real and imaginary, great and small.
Her ramblings can be found on her blog, MacKenzie’s Dragonsnest and at her web site.
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A Writer’s Gift
By Shawn MacKenzie
Excuses for gift giving proliferate today like mice on fertility drugs. Whether birthdays or unbirthdays, showers for babies, weddings, engagements (not necessarily in that order), or the ever familiar Chanukah, Yuletide, and Dragon Day (ok, I made that one up but urge you to celebrate it regularly and with flair), these occasions place increasing demands on our imaginations and our purses.
Now, when I was growing up, I thought my parents had this whole gifting thing figured out. They’re potters, you see, and so could select a vase or unomi, a teapot or fluted jar filled with homemade marmalade (my meager contribution to the fun, tweaked and perfected through the years), wrap in a piece of madras tissue paper and, voila!…. Each piece was lovingly made and personally chosen—each was a gift from the heart.
This was the tradition with which I was raised and one I have tried to continue. But I am no potter. I never had the slightest knack with wheel or glaze. I am a writer, a spinner of tales. A different beast, entirely. Unfortunately, volumes months, even years, in the creating do not make for easy gifting (and can seem extravagant for all save the most special occasion). So what is a writer to do?
Well, a few years back, a friend and fellow scribe, John Goodrich, introduced me to the wonder of chapbooks. Problem solved!
For those of you unfamiliar with the term, a chapbook is a short piece, either a brief collection of verse (if you’re poetically inclined) or a short story, etc. In modern parlance, consider it the hard-copy version of an e-book single. There are no restrictions save those of the imagination. From a writer, what could be a more personal than the sharing of one’s labors, be it a one-off (as for upcoming Mother’s Day or your significant other’s birthday) or a group printing for close friends at Samhain (what I like to call a limited edition).
So, you write your heart out, blood and sweat and appropriate affection infusing every word. With your last T crossed and comma in place, you’re ready to put it all together. This is joyful right-brain stuff: choosing your paper, typeface, and designing your cover, the wrapping and flashy ribbon for your present. I love designing books, be they chap or full-on tomes. It sooths the nascent visual artist in me and lets me play in a realm I too often ignore.
This is the time to have fun, to select the physical aspects—type and cover graphics—that speak to the heart of your words—without being too distracting or obvious or trite, of course. For those of us so inclined, it can be as satisfying as the writing itself. One word about typeface: don’t go too wild or ornate—you want something which reflects your work but is also easy on the eyes. If this sounds Greek to you, don’t worry. It just takes practice and a good eye. Standards like Perpetua, Palatino Linotype, Garamond, and minor variations thereon (serif/sans serif) are always good places to start; and if you want to jazz it up without going over the top, consider a fancy drop capital on the opening word.
Once your design choices are made, you’re entering the home stretch: time to set it up in PDF and print. Most any decent word-processing program will work for this. I personally use AdobeInDesign. It is professional software replete with bells and whistles which does require a bit of a learning curve. Still, I’ve used it for everything from a 10-page illustrated Yule cookbook to a 300+-page short-story anthology. I wouldn’t trade it for anything. Text and images can be easily placed and manipulated, making it a multipurpose program that works as well for covers as interiors. Color or black and white, anything is possible.
Of course, you don’t need bells and whistles, not a one. Word, WordPro—I am not familiar with Mac programs, but I am sure they are comparable—any of these will work. Set your layout as an 8.5 x 5.5 page (aka “half letter”) and save as a PDF, then print as a booklet (double-sided). Bingo.
For cover design, Corel PaintShopPro or its ilk works well (use an 8.5 x 11 landscape layout—front and back on one image). Note: these are just the basics: with a little imagination and a guillotine, you can create chapbooks in any shape or size you wish. Go wild!
Choose good paper—something that has appropriate gravitas for the occasion—and a slightly heavier stock for the cover. Laser printers are a boon to chapbook makers, in no small part because the print is crisper than with an ink jet and will not bleed. If you don’t have a laser printer, your local copy centre or Staples-esque establishment can run them off for you at relatively little expense. They’ll usually even staple them together for you (or you can go fancy and hand-stitch them).
I know we don’t like to worry about the depth of our purse when it comes to presents, but, hey, let’s face it: many of us are but poor scribes doing our best within our modest means.
At the end of the day, as writers, we are our words. And nothing speaks to the heart like giving a piece of ourselves.
Shawn MacKenzie
About the Author:
Shawn MacKenzie had her first Dragon encounter when she was four years old and happened upon a copy of The Dragon Green by J. Bissell-Thomas. That was the beginning of a lifelong friendship. Author of The Dragon Keeper’s Handbook (Llewellyn Worldwide, 2011), and the upcoming Dragons for Beginners (Llewellyn, November, 2012), she is an editor and writer of sci-fi/fantasy. Her fiction has been published in Southshire Pepper-Pot, 2010 Skyline Review, and as a winner of the 2010 Shires Press Award for Short Stories. Shawn is an avid student of myth, religion, philosophy, and animals, real and imaginary, great and small.
Ramblings can be found at MacKenzie’s Dragon’s Nest website and her blog, MacKenzie’s Dragon’s Nest.
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After years of reading, writing, editing, proofreading, blogging, FBing, tweeting, attending conferences, taking classes at UNM and UCLA and online, I am ready to publish. Somebody, call the NY Times!
I will publish a collection of short stories and poetry under The Orangeberry Group umbrella.
I stress the importance of hiring an editor. I am taking my own advice. I hired an editor.
I hired Shawn MacKenzie.
Shawn and I have been chatting and blogging and emailing and FBing and commiserating and bitching and laughing on a very regular basis for quite some time.
As much as I love Shawn and what she recently inspired in me, this article is not about her (her links are at the end).
This article is about hiring a kick-butt editor. My editor happens to be Shawn MacKenzie.
I thought my writing was good. I’ve been writing long enough, it should be good, eh?
Shawn takes a story and looks at it front to back and then screams a 360. She slaps it upside the head and stomps on it with heavy boots.
With poetry, Shawn suggests a stronger word or a softer word; she suggests changes to improve cadence.
Shawn imagines scenery and offers additional hints to enhance the feeling. Check this out…I had a blood-spattered Georgia O’Keeffe painting in one scene, and Shawn suggested a Jackson Pollock in a subsequent scene. Brilliant!
Shawn offers suggestions on additional pronouns (to take away the human side of a despicable character), and she suggests a squeeze and a pinch to improve visual clarity to a story’s southwest landscape.
Shawn does not cringe at the details of my squishy horror story but instead asks, “When did she toss the leg?”
Geez oh man, she so gets me.
Shawn activates a vroom of ideas I would never have had without her.
She makes me reach for it.
Shawn is like the super-hero of editors.
She is editing this blog post in her head I’m sure.
Shawn MacKenzie
Shawn MacKenzie had her first Dragon encounter when she was four years old and happened upon a copy of The Dragon Green by J. Bissell-Thomas. That was the beginning of a lifelong friendship. A graduate of Bennington College, she’s a writer of sci-fi/fantasy and an editor of crossword puzzles. Her stories have been published in Southshire Pepper-Pot, 2010 Skyline Review, and as a winner of the 2010 Shires Press Award for Short Stories. Shawn is an avid student of myth, religion, philosophy, and animals, real and imaginary, great and small. Thoughts, writings, and ramblings can be found at her website, MacKenzie’s Dragon’s Nest or at her Dragon’s Nest blog.
MacKenzie’s The Dragon Keeper’s Handbook
Find Shawn’s latest book The Dragon Keeper’s Handbook on Amazon here or find it at Llewellyn.
Shawn’s stories on my blog –
December 25, 2011 – Of Avalon and mistletoe, a solstice carol
August 16, 2011 – Have you fed your Dragon today?
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Karen R. Sanderson 